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Beros stands at the counter, watching the blacksmith as he works on the ore for the smelting. He listens to the hammers of the other workers as his ‘pet’ bird rests on his shoulder. Behind him, the crowd continues, ignoring his presence. The sun hangs high in the sky with a fall breeze, reporting the time of day to the people below. And the fall scenery are the town of Devi, Allayn makes the warmth of the forges all the more inviting.

“So, the blacksmith you work for sends you here,” the blacksmith asks after pouring the molten liquid into the bar mold.

Beros nods. “He can’t afford to leave the shop or his apprentices. I offered to do so to help pay for a request.”

The master nods in understanding as the vessel is returned back to the fires. Apparently, the teacher understands his position. Or not as well; Beros couldn’t tell. Either way, the errand is a well earned relief from his tasks of his rank. It allows him to actually visit and see places important to his father’s business. The atmosphere soothes him, seemingly welcoming him to the place.

“It is quite welcoming, isn’t it?”

His golden eyes glance to where the voice calls. A woman stands next to him with light brown and orange feathers. Wise brown eyes look up at him. Her narrow face rests on a long neck. Lean arms hide under her long sleeve tunic. “The air here is welcoming as well as calm…”

“It is,” he answers with a brief nod. “Can I help you, ma’am?”

“No, everything is fine,” she answers pushing a lock of dirty blond aside. “I’d ask the same, but it seems you have things under control.”

He quirks an eyebrow as the older female leaves with a slight smile on her face. Beros glances at the master of the forge, whom returned to the counter from his task. “Your order will be ready in the morning, lad. What name must I put on it?”

“Solaris,” the young commander answers as he leaves the counter to follow the other Phoenix. Curiosity gnaws at him, wondering what she means with the second sentence. He searches above the crowd, looking for the wings among the crowd of Man. As his search continues, he progresses through the sea…with no avail.

Hours pass, unknown and fleeing. The woman eludes him still. The crowds remain dense as he weaves through them. The sun descends, tainting the sky with a purple hue. Clouds crawl into view. Beros groans softly as he runs a hand through the red locks. He turns and heads to the inn, ready to check in. As the crowd thins out, he glances around.

Something didn’t sit right. He just couldn’t place it. His body tenses as his vision suddenly focuses and unfocuses before falling into darkness.

Beros snaps awake as the walls of his temple room vanish, replaced by the off grey walls of his room. His golden eyes frantically scan his room, landing on the red gem of his sword’s hilt next the bed. The young commander struggles to soothe his nerves. But the memories of his days captive flash before him, especially the incoming glowing cast iron brand. He internally reaches down, only finding a silent void of where his undesired guest usually dwelled.

“San…

The call through their link goes unanswered. Silence looms within him. Unsettling silence. No response. No feelings of where the former commander is or acknowledgement.

The young heart’s pace increases. What is going on? Did we merge? No… I’m still her. Where, the thought stops as a knock sounds on the frame of his door. His words tie themselves in his throat and lodge themselves there. His hands snare the hilt of his blade, aiming the still sheathed sword at the incoming intruder. All respiratory functions continue to increase, making the mind forget.

“Son,” a concerned voice penetrates. An older set of golden eyes gaze into his own. The seas of gold overflow with parental worry. Nikolas steps towards him, gently guiding the covered metal to the ground. The tanned Phoenix takes the blade away before giving him the fullest attention. “What’s wrong? You have been jumpy the past few days.”

“It’s nothing,” Beros answers, trying hard to compose his nerves and convince the man that partially raised him like wise.

However, the weapon smith looks at him. “Beros, don’t you lie to me. I’ve let you deal with your problems on your own, but this is appearing to a problem you can’t handle.”

“I can,” he snaps; the golden irises glowing in intensity. “It is my problem and has been for twenty-four years. Not yours, not my brother’s. Mine and my own. Thank you for coming to get me out of that place.”

Nikolas allows the silence to hang between them before leaving the smaller male alone. The wooden door closes behind him. Beros pushes his body up off the mattress of his bed, ignoring that his father walked out with the blade in hand. His eyes solemnly look around the room he spent a fraction of his youth in. The wall behind his door still supported the bookshelves his father moved in twenty-one years ago. The shelves retain their form under the pressure of the tomes and scrolls he loaded them with all the years ago. An outdated map of the Caelian lands clings to the wall next to his only window.

Outside, the clear black and blue night skies twinkle with lights. I slept that long… His mind wonders as he approaches the glass and stares to the heavens above as the memories swell.

“Don’t bother of asking to go outside,” the voice behind him hisses.

“Why shouldn’t I? It is you that is retaining me with no grounds,” Beros retorts.

The robed male growls; amber eyes raging. “No grounds, scum. You are the grounds. You carry a third color, scum. Something that we are never to carry!” He pauses, then continues with a grin. “Which is why we keep you here. So you are out of the picture and in Fate’s hands alone.”

“I could be in her hands out there,” the commander snaps. He spins to face the opponent. The red bangs split and fall back, framing his narrow face as the muscles of his back tense. The tricolor wings flare.

“Then, stay here and rot!”

The priest slams the door to his prison shut. The sound of his lock echoes into the room he resided. Silence looms; only the footsteps echo for a short time before fading away. Beros allows his knees to buckle, bringing his body crashing to the hard cot behind him. Both of his hands push the dark blood strands back as uncertainty gnaws at him.

“Present life…” A feeling fills him as if a person cradled his form. “I will not let them hurt you. Nor will they take your freedom.”

Beros lifts his head slightly as the soul within him vows. His mind draws blank, feeling the other lurking and looking at the memories as they happen. The protector remains silent, having said what he wished.

Days and nights blend. His captors retain their disgust; the extra soul maintains his watch. Until the end of the third day…

The memory fades as he forces himself back. You held your word, San…I’m still free and unharmed… Yet, he stops; eyes linger on the odd red moon. It feels odd… Like something is missing…

In this now solitary existence…

:icondragonknight007:
Finally, finished. I meant for the ending to be different, but decided to safe that for later. Inside, there is.

What has Lead to Solitary:

Since memories are/can be confusing, I shall explain here.

Beros' trials with Sanatos initially started in Vinoss with the desire to further develop his fire magic. Determined to learn what he can and unable to practice it due to San's affinity to the same element, Beros travels frequently to his brother in law's.

On a day free of study, he returned to Minosha and went to Allayn for a business errand for his father. Beros is abducted during the evening hours of his first day there by other Phoenix, firm believers in the race's purity. When he comes to, Beros is stripped of his weapon and garbed in a rough creme robe of the priests.

His first day of captivity was a waiting game, where the historian tried to piece together the purpose of his containment. His second followed this as well with his past life on guard. On the third day, Beros argues with a priest. During the argument, the priest backhands him, drawing the full attention of Sanatos. As the priest left, two more replaced him with a hot branding iron to condemn the commander to the life of a priest.

Sanatos refuses by tapping into the soul spell he and Beros possess, burning the temple down and unintentionally slaying the priest whom performed the backhand and orchestrated his (Beros) capture. Sanatos is calmed by Virmin, Beros' half-brother and whom came to his aid with Nikolas and Tong. With Beros back in control, the group flees the burning temple and return to Minosha after Nikolas returns the sword back to his youngest son.

It is at Nikolas' home that Beros realizes something isn't right with his past life.

Information on the Phoenix:
:bulletblack: Touched
- The wings of a Phoenix are marked with a third color. The color can crest the top of the wings or tips of the primaries. The third color is the past life's wing tip color. Granted, if the reincarnation is of the opposite gender, the third color will be of the same color family, but shift in saturation. Lighter colors for females and darker for males.
-Before the merge the younger soul finds itself with a new protector, a friend to confide in and someone who supports them in just about everything. Their protector has their own small pool of magical energy for spells before having to tap into their present life's. If that pool is depleted, the soul of the protector shuts down for a time to allow the energy to return.
-Merging with a protector is a friendly, compared to a forceful merge by one out for the domination of the present life. The protector aims to help the young soul mature, using their experiences as teaching tools. This maturity/merge could result in a personality change of the younger soul, which varies on the events leading the younger soul meeting the protector's goal before giving themselves to the newer incarnation.

:bulletblack: The Priesthood
-A part of old Phoenix society originally established five years after the race's unification. They were to record the history, but also accepted other tasks as the years went on. Especially the monitoring of the Touched after one of their lords committed suicide from a merge gone wrong.
-With the scatter of the race, only four branches of the Priesthood remain: 3 in Caelius territory and 1 in Earthra. With the Caelian branches, more often than not, the priests are ideal purists, holding low views of their original tasks and do all in their power to keep the Touched under control.

The Phoenix (c) *DragonKnight007 with aid of ~Korinthis
Tong Tong and Virmin (c) ~Korinthis
Nikolas, Beros, and Sanatos (c) *DragonKnight007
Souls of Chaos (c) *Deamond89 and *Tajaky94

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~UnmemiruDayshauna Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
interesting...
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~mad-and-mirthful Feb 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconimadplz: You cannot avoid my hugs forever, San.
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*DragonKnight007 Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
He'll return. Eventually. ;)
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*Jecksy-Candy Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oooooooooooooh * A * so intense....* ^* i wanna know how this shall eeeeeeeend
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*DragonKnight007 Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad you like it, Jecksy. :iconsweethugplz:
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